Friday, December 4, 2009

this article was talking about how to write a sentence that doesn't sound bad. Also how to put a correct sentence together even if it sounds good to the ear. the first page was on where you are suppose to put the "me" or "you" when you are talking about another person. i agree with the article because it can teach readers how to write effective sentences correctly. "that" is a word i use more than "which" and i think i would need to change it to "which" because it fits in the sentence better, as according to the article on pg. 268.


Wister coleman

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